Stephen P. Kershaw: A Brief History of Atlantis – Plato’s Ideal State (2017)

Buy this book – although it is not fair to its readers

A certain part of a scholar’s life is dedicated to „ghost busting“, i.e. to debunk wrong concepts existing out there, in the coarse reality of popular books, colourful magazines, and the vastness of the internet, and to provide the basis for a better understanding of reality at an academic level to all who are interested. This had been the basic idea of this book, possibly. And who would not support such a noble purpose? But you can exaggerate everything by going to the other extreme.

This book is deeply disappointing. After Vidal-Naquet’s one-sided book from 2005, written against all sorts of Atlantis supporters without exception, there was a chance to provide a more balanced view to the interested public, and to include new arguments. But the opportunity has been missed again. And like Vidal-Naquet’s work, this book is not fair to its readers: The readers are manipulated by all sorts of unacceptable omissions, oversimplistic arguments, and misleading wordings, as will be demonstrated in the following. Furthermore, the book contains many mistakes.

Manipulative Style

The manipulation starts right on page 1 in the very first line. There, the Atlantis story is addressed as a „myth“ without further ado. But if one thing is sure, then that Atlantis is not a myth. Because Atlantis is presented in Plato’s dialogues as a true story, not as a myth. Even if it is an invention, it is still not a myth. Atlantis is presented as the opposite of a myth. The story allegedly came from Egypt where it had been preserved in written form over a very long time thanks to the continuity of the Egyptian civilization. The claim of Plato’s dialogues is, that Egyptian texts provide a window into the past, bridging the time of which the Greeks only know myths, or nothing at all. And it is true: Egyptian texts do indeed tell such stories of ancient times, and still today Egyptologists are able to tell a lot about other countries and peoples of which information has been preserved in ancient Egyptian texts. But this book stubbornly ignores this reasonable claim which deserves to be taken seriously and discussed. This book just goes on right from page 1 to press for the idea that the Atlantis story is a myth, time and again throughout the whole book. Time and again the question is raised why there is no connection between traditional Greek mythology and the Atlantis „myth“. A question for which there is no legitimate reason to be asked.

And right on page 1, the Atlantis story is called a „tale“. The word „tale“ is explicitly presented as the translation of the Greek „logos“ without further ado. But this is plainly wrong. The word „logos“ has to be translated with a neutral word such as „story“ or „narration“, here, whereas the word „tale“ has a clear inclination towards a fabulous and imaginative meaning. Surprisingly, the book itself reveals the correct translation of „logos“ with neutral words such as „account“ or „story“, but only in footnote 38 on page 361. Why hiding away the correct translation, while at the same time penetratingly talking of the „Atlantis tale“ throughout the whole book?

The myth … the tale … the myth … the tale … – it is really annoying, how this book tries to hammer down its message into the brains of its readers. The book really seems to be written to „program“ the readers: Time and again, chapters begin with a special section in which some mythical and fabulous context is presented, or any kind of chaos and confusion is produced concerning the allegedly correct understanding of myth and truth. By putting Atlantis time and again in such contexts – in which it does not belong – the reader is step by step led to develop a biased perspective on the subject. You feel like brainwashed after a while.

So, the very first chapter does not deal with Atlantis at all, but presents all sorts of mythical and fabulous stories about far-away lands and towns in Greek literature. But the book does not mention and discuss the following things:

  • Atlantis is no myth and cannot be put into the context of myths.
  • Atlantis is no vague memory but presented as factual story from a written historical tradition with clear details, and anchored in known reality (Sais, Pillars of Hercules, geology of Athens). In antiquity, there was even no discussion about the location of Atlantis, because the (alleged) location of Atlantis is clearly defined, too.
  • Atlantis is no „paradise“, and no „wondrous“ island, as the book repeats time and again. There are no magical „wonders“ in Atlantis, and in the works of Herodotus you find bigger buildings, larger armies, similarly fertile land, and older countries; and Herodotus was a serious writer, not a myth-maker.
  • Some of the presented fabulous lands and towns are not fabulous but real. Only some of their features are fabulous, or distorted. This could well be the case with Atlantis, too, but why does this book not discuss this?
  • Some of the allegedly „mythical“ aspects of the Atlantis story are clearly not meant to be mythical by Plato, because Plato himself believed them. These are things such as a cyclical model of history, an age of Egypt of 10000 years and more, periodic natural disasters (mentioned only in footnote 43 on page 362), that good climate generates best people at the same place time and again (mentioned only in footnote 74 on page 368), or that there is no quarrel among gods.

Historical-critical approaches?

It is a major failure of this book to omit a serious discussion of historical-critical approaches. The word „historical-critical“ does not appear once in the whole book. Historical-critical approaches such as Zangger’s hypothesis concerning Troy, or the hypotheses concerning the Minoan civilization, are rejected in this book by the simplistic opinion that they do not fit to Plato’s description, and that any change of Plato’s description would be arbitrary. To express this opinion, the book puts forward the oft-cited word of Sprague de Camp about changing King Arthur into Queen Cleopatra (page 294). This oft-cited word misses the point completely.

Only on one single page, it is page 34, this book admits the necessity of a historical-critical reading: In connection with Herodotus’ works, there is talk of „the dangers of the literal interpretation of ancient evidence, especially when it comes to the dimensions of things.“ Very true indeed. But why then does this book put forward time and again with explicit or silent agreement simplistic opinions such as the opinion of Christos Doumas, that Atlantis cannot be situated in the Mediterranean Sea because the Pillars of Hercules are obviously placed at Gibraltar (footnote 80 on page 368 f.)? This is exactly the simple-minded literal interpretation, of which this book correctly warned on page 34.

Surprisingly, this book does not mention the important Sea Peoples hypothesis of Wilhelm von Christ from 1886, although it is a key component of most of the historical-critical approaches. The reader wonders: Why that? Furthermore, important academic scholars who were at least open to discuss Atlantis as a real place are not mentioned, among them Theodor Gomperz, Wilhelm Brandenstein, Massimo Pallottino, Rhys Carpenter, Sir Desmond Lee, and Herwig Görgemanns. This book even does not sort the historical-critical approaches together in one chapter. Zangger’s hypothesis is put together with crazy horses such as Hanns Hörbiger, Immanuel Velikovsky, and Erich von Däniken, next to whom Zangger is placed. This is clearly meant as a message. This book does not shy away to ridicule academic dissenters in order to hammer down its one-sided message into the brains of its readers.

Also very telling is the fact, that despite amassing all sorts of mythical and fabulous and incredible tales, this book carefully avoids mentioning that Herodotus believed that Egypt is 11000 years old, and even older. And only hidden away in a footnote the information is given that even Plato himself mentions an age of Egypt of more than 10000 years in the dialogue „The Laws“ (footnote 67 on page 366 f.). – And in this footnote, this is mentioned only in order to (ab-)use it for the suggestion that the variations of numbers (9000, 8000, 10000, …) allegedly mean that Plato himself did not take his numbers seriously. Scholars discussing Plato’s cyclical view of history would throw up their hands in horror when confronted with this opinion!

So, the Greeks in general had a wrong view of history and chronology and believed that Egypt is older than 10000 years, and Plato’s Atlantis with its age of 9000 years blends perfectly into this picture. Which means that the 9000 years of Atlantis sounded reasonable in Plato’s time, and that there is no reason to see an invention, but rather a common mistake of the time. – Yet instead of starting a reasonable historical-critical discussion, this book just presses for the simplistic view that with an age of 9000 years Atlantis would have existed in Stone Age (e.g. page 333, or footnote 69 on page 367 f.), and no further discussion is considered necessary beyond the literal reading. This is too easy.

Herodotus

It is no wonder, that we find Herodotus and his works generally misrepresented in this book. When there is talk about the spectrum of academic opinions about Herodotus, this book starts to talk about the radical skeptics who even do not believe that Herodotus was in Egypt at all, and then … the depiction of the spectrum of opinions about Herodotus surprisingly ends unfinished without further ado (page 33). The reader gets to know only about these radical skeptics. As if they represented the mainstream opinion in academia, what they do not.

The reader does not get to know that Herodotus put his sources under scrutiny. That Herodotus often added his opinion about how reliable a story is, or that he expresses the opinion that he feels obliged to write about something although he does not believe it. That Herodotus made different use of the words „mythos“ and „logos“ according to the reliablity of the story. The Greek word „historie“ coined by Herodotus translates to „research“, i.e. research for what had really happened, in order to preserve it for posterity. There are scholars who do not hesitate to see in Herodotus the first beginnings of history writing as a science. – But this book tells a completely other story (page 33): That Herodotus allegedly did not distinguish myth and history. That he allegedly did not act like a scientist. That Herodotus allegedly would come from a world where history is told in myths: Not true! Herodotus was part of the generation of the sophists, and he is clearly influenced by sophistic skepticism. Finally, this books’ opinion that a special meaning of „historia“ in Proclus’ works in Late Antiquity (rather „story“ than „history“) applied to „ancient Greece“ as a whole, and to Herodotus (page 117, 320), is clearly wrong.

Concerning Herodotus’ visit in Sais, the book presses for the question why Herodotus did not get to know anything about Atlantis there: „The historian reports a great deal of interesting information that he gleaned at Sais, but if the priest told him anything about Atlantis, he didn’t include it in his work.“ (page 32). But it is clearly wrong that Herodotus „reports a great deal of interesting information that he gleaned at Sais“ from the priest. Quite the opposite is true. Herodotus was told only one single myth by the priest, and afterwards Herodotus guessed whether the priest had ridiculed him. Why does this book pretend that Herodotus „reports a great deal of interesting information that he gleaned at Sais“ from the priest? Besides this, there are many published good reasons why Herodotus – unlike Solon – did not get to know anything about Atlantis in Sais. But none of them is mentioned in this book.

Aristotle

Concerning the important opinion of Aristotle, there is an interesting change of argument in this book, compared with the argument put forward in 2007 in the book about mythology by the same author. In 2007, it was simply claimed without further ado that in Strabo 2.3.6 there would be an explicit statement by Aristotle against the existence of Plato’s Atlantis. Now in 2017, complicated considerations are offered to the readers on this topic. Why this? The reason is that in 2010 the book „Aristoteles und Atlantis“ by Thorwald C. Franke had been published which disproved the claim that Aristotle spoke out against the existence of Atlantis. The English translation of Franke’s book is listed in the bibliography, but the reader is not informed about it and its arguments.

The complicated considerations now offered try to uphold the disproved claim. They are about similarities of words, and about Aristotle’s statement about the non-existence of the so-called „wall of the Achaeans“. But in the end, this book just only jumps (!) without further ado to the conclusion that Aristotle’s authorship of the statement about the non-existence of the „wall of the Achaeans“ somehow jumps over to the authorship of the statement about the non-existence of Atlantis (page 114). How, is not really explained. The impression cannot be avoided that the complicated considerations are written in the hope that the readers do not realize that there is a serious gap in this argument. And not one of the several counterarguments against Aristotle’s authorship of this statement are mentioned.

Concerning the similarities of words, this book follows the unfounded speculations of Harold A. Tarrant: The similarity of mere words such as „obliterate“ and „invent“ in various phrases in Greek literature allegedly gives a hint that Aristotle is the author of all of these phrases, including the phrase of „(not!) inventing“ and „obliterating“ Atlantis. But this is very questionable, since different people often use similar words when talking about similar things. And is there really a similarity between the phrase „invented“ and the phrase „not invented“ – or isn’t this quite the opposite thing? Is there still a similarity when similar words are used in very different grammatical forms? And finally: Even if all these phrases indeed had been put into words by the same author, and even if this author was Aristotle (if…if…if…if), who says that Aristotle didn’t insert a „not“ concerning Atlantis, as did Plato? You cannot draw any conclusion from such unfounded speculations.

What you can do instead, is looking for other hints about the opinion of Aristotle. And there you will quickly find many arguments which point to the conclusion that Aristotle was inclined to consider Atlantis rather a real place than an invention. The claim, that in Strabo 2.3.6 there is a statement by Aristotle against the existence of Plato’s Atlantis, is dead, and the longer scholars need to accept this new situation, the more incredible they become. This erroneous claim came into being in the year 1816, by a mistake, as can be demonstrated. Before 1816 no one ever claimed that Aristotle spoke out against the existence of Plato’s Atlantis. Quite the contrary: In the light of the other hints to Aristotle’s opinion, Aristotle had always been considered an Atlantis supporter until the 19th century, when the erroneous view came into being.

Other Ancient Authors

Concerning Crantor, this book presents the opinion of Harold A. Tarrant, that the word „historia“ does not necessarily mean „history“ in the context of Proclus’ works, but rather „story“ in a neutral sense. This is correct. Yet Crantor is still on the side of the Atlantis supporters since he tried to put forward evidence for its existence – you cannot strike him off the list of Atlantis supporters only because of a possible special meaning of „historia“. By the way, Tarrant’s opinion, that Plato was accused not of a lack of originality / of plagiarism, but of having fetched his political ideas from Egypt, is groundless and wrong for several reasons.

The whole idea presented in this book, that Egypt was considered a place of negative and incredible information by the Greeks and especially by Plato, is wrong. Plato, as an intelligent person, had obviously a differentiated view. And how could Plato defend himself against plagiarism from Egypt with the Atlantis story which allegedly came … from Egypt? Atlantis skeptics ensnare themselves in increasingly contradictory claims with this line of argument.

Concerning Theophrastus, who was the direct successor of Aristotle as head of Aristotle’s school, the book relies on Runia’s opinion that Theophrastus’ words about Atlantis as a real place are not written by Theophrastus but inserted by a later author. Yet this book does not tell its readers that Runia clearly says that he has no evidence for this, and that this is rather a feeling because Aristotle allegedly spoke out against the existence of Atlantis. But … what if Aristotle did not, as we have seen? Thus, the claim that Theophrastus, the direct successor to Aristotle, did not talk about Atlantis as a real place, is groundless, and this book should have told this to its readers.

Concerning the influential polymath Posidonius, who was a faithful follower of Aristotle’s geographical views and who spoke out in favour of the existence of Plato’s Atlantis, this book spends only one meagre paragraph and does everything to talk down his opinion. The sentence that Posidonius „reputedly endorsed the existence“ of Atlantis is questionable (page 129). Why „reputedly“? According to Strabo, Posidonius did this indeed, and there is no reason to doubt this.

We could go on talking about a lot more misrepresentations in this book, e.g. of the opinion of Cassius Longinus, yet enough of that. Let us now provide a list of ancient thinkers who wrote about Plato’s Atlantis but are omitted in this book: Strabo (only mentioned in passing when talking about Posidonius), Athenaios of Naucratis, Galenus, Zoticus, Calcidius (mentioned but not discussed), and Martianus Capella. Some of these ancient authors were found and presented to the public for the first time by Thorwald C. Franke in 2016, i.e. one year before this book was published. In addition to these authors, there were many authors who did not mention Atlantis explicitly but who confirmed important parts of the Atlantis story, so that we can safely conclude that they were in favour of the existence of Atlantis.

The Middle Ages

The Middle Ages are clearly misrepresented in this book, too. In one meagre paragraph (on page 157), this book still spreads the modern myth that in the Middle Ages no one discussed Plato’s Atlantis. But what about Remigius of Auxerre, Honorius Augustodunensis, Hugo of St. Viktor, Bernard of Chartres, William of Conches, Vincent of Beauvais, Walther of Metz, Albertus Magnus, Pietro d’Abano, Thomas Bradwardine, or Pierre d’Ailly? Some of them were in favour of, some of them against the existence of Atlantis … the modern myth of the Middle Ages as a silent time concerning Plato’s Atlantis is clearly disproved. The disproval was published by Thorwald C. Franke in 2016, one year before this book has been published.

The so-called „Platonic Myths“

It is very sad that this book does not develop an appropriate understanding of the so-called „Platonic Myths“. Without this, you only can go wrong. This can be observed with most Atlantis skeptics and most Atlantis supporters. It is a necessity to discuss the difference of „mythos“ and „myth“, because this is not the same! It would have been crucial to understand that a „Platonic Myth“ is not necessarily a myth. And what an „eikos mythos“ is. Instead, this book intersperses here and there short statements about „Plato’s myths“ which are either misleading or clearly wrong. On page 4 it is said: „Plato often used and invented myths …“. But were these „myths“ myths? And were these „myths“ really invented? And if invented, according to which rules? Scholars have developed a considerably more complicated view on the topic than this sentence claims. But this book just translates „mythos“ with „myth“ and comes to wrong conclusions, as can be seen on page 33: „Plato also uses mythos (‚myth‘) to get at the truth: understanding is more important than facts.“ This is not correct at least for certain types of „Platonic Myths“. Repeatedly, the book refers to Republic 382d in order to provide appalling and wrong interpretations of this passage: Here, Plato developed the concept of approaching truth, if the truth itself is not exactly known. The best approach to truth is still a mythos but as long as it is the best approach we have to keep this mythos (and now it is important: this mythos is not necessarily a myth and especially not a falsified story!). This is the concept of modern science, of establishing hypotheses, testing these hypotheses, keeping them as long as we have nothing better, and replacing them repeatedly by more and more correct hypotheses. – But this book interprets it as the permission to create lies and fabricated myths of which the creator knows that they are lies and wrong, in order to transport a moral lesson with them (page 311 and footnote 37, page 328). This is the ultimate misunderstanding of Plato’s intentions.

In this connection, it has to be observed, that this book suffers from the mistake to differentiate the historical tradition about Atlantis from Egypt on the one hand side, and what Critias makes of it in his speech on the other hand side. Only in footnote 102 on page 371 f. there is finally talk about this difference just in order to ignore it as unimportant without further ado.

Modern era

Concerning the development of Atlantis hypotheses after the Middle Ages until today, this book tells the usual „black legend“: That the Atlantis story had been used to justify conquest and nationalism, and finally it served „the Nazis“ as a basis for their ideology. Of course, this „black legend“ is completely wrong.

Spanish conquistadores did not use Atlantis as a justification for their conquests. Here, this book just copies a mistake from Vidal-Naquet’s book concerning Johannes Goropius Becanus. And John Dee did not use Atlantis as a justification for British claims in America. John Dee called America Atlantis, yet his claims were founded on a certain Madoc who allegedly discovered America before Columbus, and not at all on Atlantis. It would have been worth to mention Sigüenza who used the Atlantis story for the opposite purpose, i.e. in order to justify the claim that the American Indians are human beings as the Europeans. But such positive views are omitted. It is also very questionable to represent Carli or Rudbeck as driven by nationalism. Didn’t their claim that all peoples came from Atlantis establish a common bond among the various peoples? Carli and Rudbeck were patriots indeed, but nationalists „avant la lettre“? No.

This book breathes an unintelligent atmosphere, where every Atlantis skeptic is praised as a modern rationalist, whereas every Atlantis supporter is ridiculed and considered silly. By this simplistic approach the real essence and the achievements of former times and thinkers are not appreciated appropriately but are put to undeserved mockery. It would have been worth e.g., to mention that Ficino and Kircher started to develop an understanding of „Platonic Myths“. The „Pre-Adamites“ of La Peyrère are also no reason for mockery, but an important step towards abandoning the dogma of biblical chronology according to which the world is only 6000 years old. Or it would have been a necessity to discuss that Thomas Henri Martin, although believing that the Atlantis story is not true, still believed that the Atlantis story came from Egypt – which is an opinion clearly opposed to the perspective and concept of this book. Although Martin’s opinion is cited in this book, it is passed over without spending a single word on it.

Finally, „the Nazis“. If one thing is sure, then that „the Nazis“ did not believe in Atlantis. Heinrich Himmler did, yet „the Nazis“ did not. Nevertheless, this book repeatedly speaks of „the Nazis“, even in headlines, and writes „that Nazi ideology was happy to embrace the idea that the Atlanteans generated the Aryan race.“ Furthermore, this book sublimely suggests that the atrocities of National Socialism were somehow connected with the alleged belief in Atlantis, by statements such as: „Those who can make you believe absurdities can make you commit atrocities.“ or: „But the fact that German’s history in the 1930s and 1940s is anything but wondrous owes a certain amount to the kind of manipulation of the truth that pseudoscientific Atlantis speculation perpetrates.“ (pages 261, 264, 268). – This depiction of an alleged Nazi-Atlantis connection is itself pseudo-history in the line of Indiana Jones movies. The book also suffers from a serious lack of cited literature, since Richard Wagner, Rosenberg and Goodrick-Clarke are missing entirely. – While this book presses for an alleged Nazi-Atlantis connection, connections between Atlantis belief and Socialism are completely omitted.

Atlantis Skepticism?

This book concentrates a lot on the development of Atlantis location hypotheses but it does not focus on the development of Atlantis skepticism. This gives the reader the impression that there was no such development, as if „intelligent“ persons „always“ were Atlantis skeptics. But this is wrong. Atlantis skepticism prevailed in academia only beginning with the 19th century. This book does not talk about the Göttingen Empirists and Materialists, or Franz Susemihl, and in the chapter about Romanticism this book has completely „forgotten“ that Atlantis skepticism evolved exactly in the period of the „Romantic“ interpretation of Plato! For Romanticists, myths are everything, and rationality and facts are nothing, and they imputed this romantic attitude to Plato. The idea of Atlantis as a myth and an invention evolved from romantic ideas, under the perspective of a romantic interpretation of Platonic Myths. These wrong romantic ideas about Platonic Myths can still be identified … in this book! See above.

Furthermore, this book does not discuss the problems of the invention hypothesis. As if there were no such problems. What about the fact that the proponents of the invention hypothesis contradict each other in many aspects of their invention hypotheses? Some say e.g. that Plato used models from Herodotus for his alleged invention because he wanted to allude to the Persian Wars; others say that he used these models but he did not want them to be recognized as an allusion to anything; and others say that Plato did not use any models at all but invented everything out of thin air.

Concerning the Noble Lie, which is explicitly the preferred interpretation in many passages in this book, there are serious differences between scholars. Some say that the Atlantis story is not a Noble Lie at all. Others say, it is a Noble Lie but only within the dialogues, not for their readers in the real world. Others say that the Noble Lie is intended to deceive the readers of the dialogues. And of course: If the readers of the dialogues could not recognize the story as wrong, doesn’t this mean that it was believable in Plato’s times? And if it was believable, doesn’t this open up the possibility that Plato (and Solon, and the Egyptian priest) did not invent this story but made mistakes in interpreting ancient sources, such as the Greeks’ general mistake with the 10000+ years of Egypt? How do you distinguish a well-made deception from a true story with mistakes in it? Wouldn’t this question be worth to be discussed?

Many More Problems

The presented translation of Plato’s dialogues Timaeus and Critias contains some mistakes, yet these are no special mistakes of this translation. They are common mistakes of many other known translations. It is a pity that the comments to the translation are put into footnotes. They contain many important arguments! So you have to read through lengthy footnotes given in small print at the end of the book, which is very annoying.

We do not talk any more about the mistake to expect „Atlantis“ to be the name of Atlantis (pages 304, 333), although this is nonsense since „Atlantis“ is not a name as this book itself clearly says on page 3 and page 292 (against Erich von Däniken, by the way). Or about the mistake to assume 1000 years of oral tradition because of the difference of 8000 and 9000 years (footnote 66 on page 366). Or about the mistake to consider „oreichalkos“ simply and only as a „mythical“ substance (footnote 72 on page 378). Or about the mistake to interpret a „hos logos“ as indication that the story is invented (footnote 131 on page 384). Or about the mistake to see in Theopompus’ Meropis hints to an allegorical character of the Atlantis story (page 111). Or about the mistake to interpret Plinius’ „si Platoni credimus“ as doubt about the existence of Atlantis (page 136). Or about the mistake to realize that the Atlantis skepticism of Cosmas Indicopleustes indicates its opposite since Cosmas was a Christian fanatic against (!) the Classical Tradition (page 154). Or about the mistake to define the length of a stadion with 200 meters (footnote 8 on page 349). Many, many more things could be said, but we leave it at that.

In the very last chapter, the conclusion is drawn that „looking for Atlantis resembles trying to find Hogwarts in J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter novels“. This comparison reveals that this book suffers from a serious lack of understanding of the problems it is dealing with. J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter novels are not presented as true stories, but Plato’s Atlantis is. (Otherwise this book could not talk of it as a Noble Lie.) And J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter novels contain many magical and phantastical elements, whereas Plato’s Atlantis story does not, at least in the eyes of Plato and his contemporaries – and this is the perspective which we have to consider: The historical-critical perspective.

Conclusion

Despite all understanding for the fight against all sorts of nonsense about Atlantis, it has to be criticized that this book exaggerates this fight and goes to the other extreme. This book is not fair to its readers. You cannot write a book like that any more – if you ever were allowed to write books like that. University scholars have to be very, very careful to avoid loosing their credibility. Because only credibility will provide them the authority to keep alive the ideal of academia, and to speak out against utter nonsense.

This review is not intended to prevent you from buying this book. If you are really interested in Atlantis as a real place, then please consider that you are credible only, if you engaged yourself with the arguments of Atlantis skeptics. Therefore: Buy this book, read it carefully, including the footnotes, and make up your own mind on the matter.

2018 edition under different title

In 2018, Kershaw’s book was reprinted by Pegasus Books for the US book market under a different title, without announcing that this is just the same book. Even on the copyright page this fact is not mentioned! The book itself is exactly the same, page by page, word by word, including bibliography and index. – Again, this book was not fair to its readers, who bought the same book twice under different titles. And it reminds of the repeated exercise of peudoscientific authors who edit their same books time and again under various titles.

Let us have a closer look at the few changes in title and blurb:

The author’s name:

  • UK: „Stephen P. Kershaw“
  • US: „Steve P. Kershaw, Ph.D.“

Obviously, the „Ph.D“ shall suggest academic competence, and „Steve“ sounds more American than „Stephen“?

The book’s title:

  • UK: „A brief history of Atlantis – Plato’s ideal state“
  • US: „The search for Atlantis – A history of Plato’s ideal state“

The US title inserts the aspect of „search“. Both versions contain the heavy mistake to suggest to the readers that Atlantis represented Plato’s ideal state.

The book’s blurb:

  • UK: The emphasis is completely on contemporary politics and „Trumpism“. First sentence of the blurb in style of a headline is: „Why today’s leaders should pay heed to Plato’s tales of an ideal state, and its ruin.“ Further: „contemporary relevance“, and: „post-truth world“, and: „should be prescribed reading for every political leader.“
  • US: The US blurb puts the emphasis on the aspect of the search, on open questions, and even omits completely that the basic idea of this book is that Atlantis is an invention and nothing more. In the jacket’s inside blurb, one sentence of the British version is repeated: „… should be prescribed reading for every political leader.“ And then the question follows, whether Atlantis is history or a parable, and this question is left open, as if the book left this question open.

Obviously, the US edition eliminated everything which could be understood as criticism of the Trump presidency, and wants to attract the supporters of the existence of Atlantis, by suggesting that the book is about search, about open questions, and by not giving any hint that this book proclaims a very clear and one-sided message: Atlantis is an invention, and Atlantis searchers are not very intelligent, or even evil.

Also the biographical text about the author has been shortened by ca. 50%, but no special observation, here.

Bibliography

  • Kershaw (2017): Stephen P. Kershaw, A Brief History of Atlantis – Plato’s Ideal State, Robinson, London 2017.
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  • Kershaw (2018): Steve P. Kershaw, The search for Atlantis – A history of Plato’s ideal state, Pegasus Books, New York 2018.

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(Erstveröffentlichung auf Atlantis-Scout November 2017)

Thomas Gifford: Assassini – Der Vatikan-Thriller (1990)

Etwas quälende Story mit geringem Ertrag an Spannung, Bildung, Aufklärung

Thomas Giffords „Assassini“ ist ein Vatikan-Thriller, der lange Zeit vor Dan Browns Illuminati erschien und deshalb auch nach ganz anderen Regeln funktioniert. Im Zentrum steht kein uraltes Geheimnis, das zu erforschen wäre, sondern eine Priester-Connection aus dem Zweiten Weltkrieg, deren alte Verbindungen und Rivalitäten Jahrzehnte später zu einer Serie von Morden führt. Die Assassini aus dem 16. Jahrhundert haben dafür kaum mehr als ihren Namen beigesteuert, ihre Einbeziehung in die Story wirkt sehr aufgesetzt.

Der Roman ist auch wesentlich langatmiger als man es von heutigen Romanen gewohnt ist, die Geschichte entwickelt sich eher gemächlich. Die Protagonisten hangeln sich auch kaum selbst von Hinweis zu Hinweis, sondern kommen eher durch Zufälle mit ihren Recherchen voran, oder durch lange Monologe von Zeitzeugen. Es nervt besonders, dass ein Kapitel oft genau in dem Moment abbricht, in dem ein weiteres Stück des Geheimnisses gelüftet wird, so dass der Leser für eine ganze Weile weniger weiß als die Protagonisten des Romans – auf diese Weise baut sich eher Ärger als Spannung auf.

Auch die Story selbst erscheint ein wenig gekünstelt und unwirklich: Dass der Vatikan im Zweiten Weltkrieg nichts besseres zu tun hatte, als sich mit den Nationalsozialisten die Beutekunst zu teilen, ist kaum glaubwürdig; auch das Schema von Papst Pius XII. als Nazi-Papst ist so nicht haltbar.

Der Roman hat nur eine einzige nützliche und aufklärerische Wirkung: Man sieht Priester, Nonnen, Kardinäle und einflussreiche gläubige Laien als ganz normale Menschen denken und handeln und realistisch unfromm sein, und verliert so – sofern man gläubig ist – ein Stück weit die falsche Ehrfurcht und das falsche Vertrauen, das Gläubige der Kirche und ihren Repräsentanten häufig entgegen bringen. Man lernt ein wenig zweifeln und fragen, auch wenn die Story selbst leider zu dick aufgetragen ist, um gläubige Menschen überzeugend ansprechen zu können.

Fazit

Eine etwas quälende Story mit wenig Ertrag an Spannung, Bildung und Aufklärung.

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(Erstveröffentlichung auf Amazon ca. 26. Juni 2011; heute dort verschwunden)

Jürgen Roth: Der Deutschland-Clan – Das skrupellose Netzwerk aus Politikern, Top-Managern und Justiz (2007)

Interessant, aber dennoch völlig unbefriedigend

Irgendwie befriedigt dieses Buch nicht. Nicht, dass es nicht ordentlich recherchiert wäre. Manches ist auch interessant. Aber … zum einen schildert Roth viele einzelne Fälle, die jedoch keinen Zusammenhang haben; deshalb schon von einem „Clan“ zu sprechen halte ich für gewagt. Vieles hat man auch schon als aufmerksamer Zeitungsleser mitbekommen, Roth liefert da nur noch ein paar Zusatzdetails.

Aufgefallen ist mir, dass Roth Gewerkschaften, Verbände, NGOs, Kirchen, islamische Organisationen u.v.a. nicht zum „Clan“ zu rechnen scheint, sie kommen nicht vor. Etwas nervig ist, dass Roth offenbar politisch spürbar links steht: Notwendige Maßnahmen zum Umbau des Sozialstaates sieht er deshalb als Teil des „Clans“. Ebenso geht es mit notwendigen marktwirtschaftlichen Bereinigungsprozessen, die für die Betroffenen natürlich schmerzlich, für die Gesellschaft aber unumgänglich sind.

Völlig unbefriedigend ist, dass Roth immer nur Probleme darstellt, aber kaum eine Zeile darauf verwendet, was sich denn ändern müsste, damit die beschriebenen Probleme reduziert werden. Klagen ist immer einfacher als Vorschläge machen. Mich würde z.B. interessieren, welche Maßnahmen in Italien sich als wirksam gegen die Mafia herausgestellt haben.

Alles in allem entnehme ich dem Buch die wenig originelle These, dass die Moral der Gesellschaft insgesamt abgenommen hat. Dieses Phänomen, seine Ursachen, und was man dagegen tun könnte, hätte Roth viel intensiver beleuchten sollen.

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(Erstveröffentlichung auf Amazon am 05. April 2009; dort inzwischen nicht mehr aufzufinden)

Michael Klonovsky: Land der Wunder (2009)

Ästhetisch unakzeptabel: Enttäuschung von diesem Autor

Nachdem ich den „Ramses-Code“ vom selben Autor gelesen hatte, griff ich zum „Land der Wunder“. Ein Fehlgriff. Das Buch ist im Gossenstil der „Idiot“-Bücher geschrieben, offenbar, um ein breites Lesepublikum zu erreichen. Man muss auch solche Bücher einmal gelesen haben, um über unkultiviertes Denken und Empfinden unterrichtet zu sein – aber einmal reicht völlig.

Diesmal habe ich – was ich sehr selten tue – die Lektüre abgebrochen, und zwar an der Stelle, wo der Held der Geschichte besoffen auf der Toilette seiner Freundin einschlief und vom Nebenbuhler den Hintern abgewischt bekam, welcher tags darauf mit Freundin vor dem Erwachenden steht, in Unterhosen, den Geruch von Sperma u.a. verbreitend. Das ist es, was von diesem Buch bleibt, und das muss man sich nicht geben.

Nach kurzem Überfliegen des Endes (die Freundin und überzeugte Sozialistin wurde zur Prostituierten und stirbt an Krebs) war ich mit dem Buch fertig.

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(Erstveröffentlichung auf Amazon am 23. Mai 2015)

Sonia Rossi: Fucking Berlin – Studentin und Teilzeit-Hure (2008)

Klischeehaft und ohne Berlin-Bezug

Das Buch „Fucking Berlin“ von Sonia Rossi ist leider nur ein typisches Milieu-Buch, das die üblichen Klischees ableiert. Die arme Studentin aus behütetem Hause, das schrittweise Abrutschen in die Prostitution, das den Übergang von moralisch zu unmoralisch kaschiert, der liebe, aber naive Freund, das völlig irrationale Verlieben in einen kiffenden Strichjungen, was einem Mädchen aus gutem Hause wohl eher selten passieren dürfte, die Abtreibung, das eigene Kind, die üblichen Freier-Archetypen usw. usf.

Dieses Buch könnte von vorne bis hinten eine einzige Erfindung nach Vorgabe sein. Aber vielleicht ist die Wirklichkeit in diesem Milieu ja tatsächlich eine Ansammlung von Klischees. Das Leben kann manchmal sehr banal sein. In diesem Sinne wäre es dann doch gut, dass dieses Buch geschrieben wurde.

Wie auch immer: Man sollte durchaus einmal ein Buch dieser Art gelesen haben, aber dieses eine Buch reicht dann fürs Leben. Mit Berlin hat die Story übrigens nicht allzu viel zu tun.

Bewertung: 3 von 5 Sternen.

Gelesen und rezensiert: Januar 2011.

Dave Eggers: Your Fathers, Where Are They? And the Prophets, Do They Live Forever? (2014)

Great plot lost to an unexpected theme

The plot of this book is a great idea: A young man kidnaps several persons who played a role in his upbringing, his mother, a teacher, a congressman, a policeman, an astronaut, and forces them to answer those questions he always wanted to be answered.

Don’t we all want to have answers from certain persons from our past? Why did they act like they acted? What did they really think? Our parents, teachers, etc.?

This book could have been a great story, if it concentrated on the big questions in the heart of everybody.

The problem is: The book is not about these big questions, and the young kidnapper is not everybody. The book is about fatherless young men. Partly non-white. And their problems. And troubles with the police which makes use of guns far to quickly. And drug-addicted mothers. This is interesting, too, but it disappoints the expectation.

Therefore the title: „Your fathers where are they?“ And the young man killed by the police far too quickly considered himself to be a prophet, therefore the title „and the prophets, do they live forever?“ First you think, these are some of the questions the young kidnapper will ask his victims, yet these questions never appear in all the book.

The dialogue as literary form is well-applied in this book, this made it worth reading, too.

Bewertung: 4 von 5 Sternen.

(Erstveröffentlichung auf Amazon am 15. August 2015)

Joachim Gauck: Winter im Sommer – Frühling im Herbst – Erinnerungen (2009)

Das Selbstverständliche sagen, auch wenn es ungelegen kommt

Joachim Gaucks Autobiographie ist solide, enthält aber auch keine Überraschungen. Vor allem im Schlussteil äußert Gauck einige Selbstverständlichkeiten, deren Besonderheit allein darin liegt, dass es heute leider nicht mehr selbstverständlich ist, dass diese Ansichten geäußert werden. Beispiele: Bei aller Kritik am „kapitalistischen“ System, vor allem von linker Seite – ohne Freiheit wird alles nur noch schlimmer, ohne Freiheit ist alles nichts. Und: Die Linken behindern die Aufarbeitung des DDR-Unrechts und messen mit zweierlei Maß, weil sie nicht in der Lage sind, sich mit ihrer eigenen Schuld zu befassen. Es tut gut, diese Selbstverständlichkeiten ausgesprochen zu sehen, und dass Gauck dies tut, ist zu würdigen.

Grenzwertig ist Gaucks Würdigung des Widerstandes von Kommunisten. Er macht nämlich nicht deutlich, ob er hier den Widerstand von Einzelnen würdigen möchte, die aus Naivität die Unmenschlichkeit ihrer eigenen kommunistischen Ideologie nicht verstanden haben – das wäre in Ordnung. Oder ob er hier die kommunistische Ideologie ganz oder teilweise mit würdigt – das wäre nicht in Ordnung.

Interessant ist Gaucks Verhältnis zum christlichen Glauben. Denn Gauck wurde nicht deshalb Pastor, weil er besonders gläubig gewesen wäre, sondern weil ihn die Suche nach einer Ausweichmöglichkeit vor dem Regime dorthin trieb. Völlig akzeptabel ist es, wenn er schreibt, dass der Glaube „neben“ dem kritischen Denken steht. Völlig unverständlich jedoch ist es, wenn er tiefgläubige osteuropäische Bauern als Vorbilder im Glauben nennt – denn deren Gläubigkeit und Ungeplagtheit von Zweifeln ist ja keiner besonderen Leistung geschuldet, sondern vielmehr einem Mangel: Einem Mangel an Fähigkeit zur Selbstreflexion. Überhaupt kann die christliche Ausformung von Gläubigkeit bei Gauck nur vor dem Hintergrund seines Lebens verstanden werden: Die Umstände legten es ihm eben nahe, in die allzu große Ungewissheit des christlichen Glaubens zu „springen“, und Gauck „sprang“. Vernünftig ist dieser „Sprung“ jedoch nicht. Gaucks Erklärungen zu diesem Punkt sind sehr verständlich und müssen hingenommen werden, sie sind aber nicht überzeugend.

Die von Gauck gewählten Schwerpunkte des Buches verwundern ein wenig. Werden hier nicht zu viele Fluchtgeschichten erzählt? Gab es denn nichts anderes im Alltag der DDR? Andererseits muss man davon ausgehen, dass Gauck diesen Schwerpunkt nicht ohne Bedacht gewählt hatte. Vielleicht war es ja tatsächlich so, dass den Menschen in der DDR die Fluchten und Ausreisen als Hauptereignisse im Vordergrund ihrer Wahrnehmung standen, und nicht ihr Alltagsleben.

Etwas problematisch ist die Chronologie: Die Kapitel sind teilweise chronologisch, teilweise aber auch unchronologisch thematisch gehalten, so dass Gauck z.B. zunächst plötzlich verheiratet ist, die Darlegung seiner Eheschließung jedoch erst weiter hinten im Buch erfolgt.

Bewertung: 4 von 5 Sternen.

(Geschrieben Anfang März 2012)

Tibor Rode: Das Los (2014)

Richtig gute Story technisch nicht optimal umgesetzt

Tibor Rode kann gute historische Stoffe finden und sie auch gut für einen Roman aufbereiten. Das hat er hier wieder gezeigt. Das Thema Glück und Spiel wird literarisch gelungen aufbereitet, anhand der preußischen Lotterie von Friedrich dem Großen und dem modernen Pokerspiel.

Aber bei der technischen Umsetzung zeigen sich weiterhin Mängel: Die verschiedenen Handlungsstränge fangen erst nach 2-3 Stunden Hörzeit (Hörbuch) an, sich zu verknüpfen. Das ist zu lange. Und da fängt die Zusammenführung ja erst langsam an! Das endgültige Zusammenführen der verschiedenen Handlungsstränge geschieht erst kurz vor Schluss!

Allerdings hat das Buch einen völlig überraschenden und schönen Schluss, der einen wieder versöhnt. Lesen lohnt, der Leser sollte aber wirklich bis zum Schluss die Hoffnung aufrecht erhalten, dass sich das Buch wider Erwarten doch noch rundet.

Bewertung: 4 von 5 Sternen.

(Erstveröffentlichung auf Amazon am 24. Januar 2016)

Akif Pirinçci: Deutschland von Sinnen – Der irre Kult um Frauen, Homosexuelle und Zuwanderer (2014)

Ehrliche und untermauerte „Rede an die deutsche Nation“

Akif Pirincci (wie immer sich dieser Name ausspricht) hat eine flammende Rede und einen aufrichtigen Appell an die Deutschen geschrieben, der sich durch Klarheit ebenso wie Einfachheit auszeichnet, mit der er die Wahrheit auf eine zutiefst menschliche Weise ausspricht: Pirincci pflegt einen bodenständigen Realismus, der sich ein X nicht für ein U vormachen lässt, der sich einen Blick für das bewahrt hat, was nicht verschwindet, wenn man aufhört daran zu glauben. Dabei wünscht Pirincci den Grünen Gutmenschen nicht einmal Strafe an den Hals, sie mögen einfach nur die Klappe halten und gehen. Und seine holzschnittartigen Thesen lassen explizit Raum für Andersartigkeit, nur dass Pirincci diese nicht für den Normalfall hält und das auch klar sagt.

Seine Sprache ist weniger eine Gossensprache, sondern vielmehr die Sprache, in der ein Mensch denkt, aber nicht spricht. Eine Sprache der deutlichen Worte, die aber nicht verletzend gemeint sind, sondern nur wahr.

Sehr gut hat Pirincci das Thema der Öffentlichen-Rechtlichen Medien aufgegriffen, das im Tugendterror-Buch von Sarrazin seltsamerweise unter den Tisch fiel. Beim Thema Islam schwächelt Pirincci ein wenig, denn die Möglichkeit eines aufgeklärten Islam analog zum heutigen Christentum blendet er komplett aus – kein großes Problem, da der aufgeklärte Islam noch im Embryo-Status ist. Seine Erlebnisse vor einem deutschen Gericht sind lesenswert. Seine Analyse der prekären Lage der deutschen Mittelschicht (das sind Du und Ich) rüttelt auf. Seine Einsichten in Wirkzusammenhänge der Wirklichkeit sind teilweise beeindruckend.

Dies ist kein dummes Buch. Was ich bei Sarrazin ebenfalls noch nicht gelesen hatte, ist der Umstand, dass die Zuwanderer überwiegend männlich sind, und deshalb das Geschlechterverhältnis in Deutschland auf der Kippe steht. Pirincci kritisiert meisterhaft die deutschen Journalisten und Intellektuellen: Sollten sie nicht hinter den Vorhang der Verhältnisse schauen, anstatt dabei zu helfen, den Vorhang über die Verhältnisse auszubreiten?

Pirinccis Vision ist kein negativer Reflex, sondern ein konstruktiver Appell: Deutsche Männer! Deutsche Frauen! Ihr seid etwas, seid Euch dessen bewusst! Es ist eine Rede an die deutsche Nation, wie in Zeiten des Vormärz. Es ist weniger ein Versuch, ausgefeilte Lösungen für alles anzubieten, als vielmehr ein Aufruf zum Perspektivwechsel! Unter diesem Gesichtspunkt sind dann auch alle Grobheiten und Einfachheiten verständlich und verlieren ihre Schärfe.

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(Erstveröffentlichung auf Amazon am 10. August 2014; inzwischen dort verschwunden)

Heinz Helle: Die Überwindung der Schwerkraft (2018)

Unausgeführte literarische Versuche, die kein Ganzes ergeben, und wenig hell sind

Dieses Buch ist ein Torso. Es hat lauter unzusammenhängende Kleinigkeiten darin, die literarisch oder inhaltlich von Wert sind: Zunächst ein endloser psychedelischer Strom von Assoziationen und Rückblenden, teilweise im Suff. Dann die literarische Gestaltung des Redens im Suff (Marmeladow in Dostojewskis Schuld und Sühne bleibt aber unerreicht). Sehr interessant die Idee, dass die Sprache durch ihren Klang Trost und Sicherheit spendet, und weniger durch ihre Inhalte. In diesem Sinne könnte der psychedelische Strom von Assoziationen in diesem Buch als beruhigendes Dauermurmeln für den Leser interpretiert werden.

Inhaltlich werden zahllose aktuelle Themen angerissen, insbesondere in der Oberflächlickeit des Suffs, aber dann bekommen die Themen häufig doch noch einen Drive in größere Tiefe. Aber immer nur angedeutet. Und das ist zu wenig. Die Brüderbeziehung ist hingegen eher klassisch: Auf der einen Seite ein Schwärmer und Idealist, der vieles anfängt und nichts zu Ende bringt, eine verletzliche und empfindliche Natur, die hysterisch auf die Probleme der Welt reagiert, geistig meist an der Oberfläche verbleibt und Küchenphilosophie betreibt, sich schwer in soziale Zusammenhänge einordnet, Erfolg bei den Frauen hat, aber keine dauerhafte Beziehung zustande bringt, und schließlich dem Alkohol verfällt. Auf der anderen Seite der eher nüchterne, rationale Typ, zurückhaltend und deshalb auch robuster, der Dinge zu Ende führt und tiefer in die Gedanken eindringt (z.B. Panpsychismus). Zwei Welten treffen aufeinander. Neu ist das aber nicht.

Schließlich der Tod als Thema. Die Trauer. Die Erinnerung. Die Banalität des Todes. Trost durch den Erzählstrom der Worte, ohne dass es auf Inhalte ankäme. Wie das Gutenachtlied für Kinder. Nein, das ist alles nicht überzeugend. Ich hätte z.B. gerne gehört, ob der Panpsychismus in der Lage ist, Trost zu spenden. Oder ob der Bruder, der sich sein Leben selbst schwer gemacht hatte, sein Leben tapfer und tugendhaft gelebt hat, und ob das Trost spenden kann. Aber nichts davon.

Und all das wird nicht zu einem größeren Ganzen integriert.

An einer Stelle blieb eine Dummheit stehen, die sauer aufstößt. Es geht um die Deutschen unter dem Nationalsozialismus, Zitat: „… die Einwohner jenes Landes in der Mitte des Kontinents, deren Eltern das Zerstören und Töten, das später auch die eigenen Kinder traumatisierte, ja überhaupt erst in Gang gesetzt hatten, durch offene Zustimmung oder mangelnden Widerstand“ (S. 166).

Dass es unzulässig ist, ein ganzes Volk für eine Diktatur in Haft zu nehmen, wusste schon Thukydides, und dass die Athener von dieser Weisheit später abkamen, hatte Thukydides mit großer Klarheit als deutlichstes Zeichen des moralischen Verfalls erkannt. Hinzu kommt die unsägliche Leichtigkeit, mit der es heute üblich geworden ist zu sagen, man hätte bitteschön gefälligst Widerstand leisten sollen, ansonsten wäre man eben schuldig. Ich muss kein Buch gut finden, das mir solche Dummheiten vorsetzt. Die Menschen heute scheitern ja bereits daran, ihre Vereinnahmung durch den Zeitgeist überhaupt zu erkennen, geschweige denn, dass sie Widerstand leisten würden, obwohl man heute dazu weit weniger Mut benötigt, als damals. Bücher sollten ihre Leser aufklären und nicht zur Verwirrung beitragen.

Fazit

Dies ist ist ein Trümmerhaufen von einem Buch. Aus den verkohlten Resten der Ruine kann ein findiger Lumpensammler zwar Kleinigkeiten von Schrottwert herausziehen, mehr aber nicht. Der Titel ist Programm: „Die Überwindung der Schwerkraft“. Ein hehres Versprechen, von dem aber jeder weiß, dass das gar nicht geht. Damit ist dieses Buch völlig programmgemäß an seinem eigenen Anspruch gescheitert.

Bewertung: 1 von 5 Sternen.

(Erstveröffentlichung auf Amazon am 17. Juli 2019)

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